Tuesday, December 18, 2007


Burst of Sunlight

Peaceful as a bird in flight

Cast across the sea.

~Erin (written in 6th grade)


Frank said...

There's haiku and then there's haiku. This one really takes me there. I love it!

Rebecca said...

I love this one too! Funny how life comes full circle. Your poem speaks to me a little about your life right now... you are a burst of sunlight, and while you may not always be able to glide as peacefully as a bird in flight (having often to flap your wings when you hit those pockets of air that change your flight pattern ever so slightly... I imagine you to feel a little cast across the sea by oh, so many...
Love ya woman! Be good to yourself.